I think what you published was very reasonable. But, what about this?
suppose you added a little content? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your blog, however suppose
you added a headline to maybe get folk's attention? I mean ヘアコバblog 〜長岡駅近くの隠れ家的床屋〜 -
ブリーフみたいな朝(笑) is kinda boring. You ought to peek at Yahoo's front page and
watch how they write post headlines to grab viewers
interested. You might add a video or a related picture
or two to get readers interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it would make your website a little
bit more interesting.